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l have a dog named Max but he hates cats and flees. l have had him since he was a puppy dog. l called him max because my pops named is max and it reminds me of him when he came over. l have had him when was one. That is why l named him that.
I have a sister named Natalie. Everyone says she is cute. It is annoying because it is true but people do not believe me when I say she hurts me and tries to bully me at home. Reader probably you don’t believe me either but really it is the truth. She is one of the worst people I have ever known.
This is why my sister is so annoying.
Edited by Adi
And suddenly Fred went crazy because he hadn’t been outside for weeks.
After half an hour the old man finally managed to get Fred under control and took him for a walk after a few weeks.
While the old man was on the walk he ran into another old man with an Alpaca. So they started to have a chat while they were walking their Alpacas. When their legs got tired they both tied up the Alpacas and sat down.
Since the men got carried away chatting they didn’t notice that the Alpacas were gone!
They both started looking around the area they were both sitting.
Since the old men couldn’t find the alpacas they knocked on doors of the closest houses and asked “have you seen two brown alpakas”.
To Mr.Mac I believe I should be selected in the football team without trying out. This is why I should be selected over everyone else.
I believe this because I practise 4 times a week handballing and kicking with my dad and my younger sister 1 hour every time I play. I should also be in the football team because I can run fast and bounce at the same time. I am also a great tackler and can defend really well.
I am also not a bad goal kicker. If I had 10 shots at goal 20 metres out I would get 6 or more goals. I am really good at kicking bananas and torpedos.
I am a really good marker. I dive when the ball is low and jump when the ball is high. Once I jumped on my sisters back and took a brilliant mark. I also take alot of1 handers when I know I have more than a 64 % or more chance of marking it with 1 hand.
80%of the time I would be able to mark the footy. 60 % or even more of the time I would mark the football in a 1 on 1 contest. A 2 on 2 contest I would have a 31 % chance of marking the football. but with 1 hand I would only have a 1% chance of marking the football in a 2 on 2 contest. In a 1 on 1 contest I would have a 25 % chance on marking the football with 1 hand.
After reading this persuasive peace I hope you pick me to be in the team. Remember to select the best players. I hope it is including myself.
From Joshua MIZZI
Playground panda.
My name is Peter panda. People say I am a dreamer because I have always wanted to go to a playground, I live in a zoo .The closest play ground is a TWO EVEN THREE minute walk!!!It might not sound like a long walk but I’m a panda, we’re lazy. Anyway, this is my story. First I had to escape the zoo which is pretty easy if you’re a panda, but first nap time (1 HOUR LATER). Whoa I escaped .I think they thought I was dead and dumped me at the park. To be honest I lied I thought it was going to be hard to escape but, look I’m at the playground. I found a camera and I asked a girl to take my photo she was beautiful she had blonde hair and wore a white jacket over her black dress, she had black shoes and black leggings but for some reason she fainted, I think it was something I said, so I took the photo and became the first panda cow boy. yeehaw!!!
By manjulika
Edited by adi
The story of Lacy
One day a dog named Lacy went to the Water field’s park. Lacy the black dog was able to talk. He asked his owners Lilly and Dillon if he could by a pretend dolphin with his money. Dillon said to Lacy the dolphin was 25 dollars and a rip off. But lacy would not listen and he brought the pretend dolphin and was already playing with it. He also brought a tub so the dolphin can swim in it. It was time to go home but Lacy wanted to stay at Water fields forever. They said that they will give him his favourite sour and sweet doggie chewy sticks. He went into the Jeep with the things that he bought from the water park. When they got home Lacy and all the things the black dog bought went inside. Lacy the small black dog in the house that was the darkest place you could ever imagine into was figuring out a name for his new best friend. He wrote down Dillon, Lilly and their son Benjamin what they thought he should call his new best friend. Lilly said he should call her Ruby. Dillon said he should call her Isabel. Their son Benjamin said to call her Bianca. He decided it was going to be out of Ruby and Bianca but he could not decide. He asked Dillon for his opinion because if he asked the others they would choose their own. Dillon said to call her Ruby Bianca Wellington.
The End
By Joshua
The dog that once prayed
Once there was a dog that loved his family so much that he copied everything his family would do, his name was butch, he was a golden brown coloured dog with a black snout and big heart. One day before bed he came into the little boys room and saw him doing something funny, he decided to copy, he put his front paws up on the bed and closed his eyes. He listened to the boy mumbling the words “god bless mum, god bless dad”… and copied added his own twist…
“God bless my family, god bless my chew bones and god bless my squeaky toys!
After praying the boy went to bed so butch copied and went to his own bed in a corner in the little boys room, curled up in his bed gave a yawn and went to sleep.
l have a dog named Max but he hates cats and flees. l have had him since he was a puppy dog. l called him max because my pops named is max and it reminds me of him when he came over. l have had him when was one. That is why l named him that.
I have a sister named Natalie. Everyone says she is cute. It is annoying because it is true but people do not believe me when I say she hurts me and tries to bully me at home. Reader probably you don’t believe me either but really it is the truth. She is one of the worst people I have ever known.
This is why my sister is so annoying.
Edited by Adi
And suddenly Fred went crazy because he hadn’t been outside for weeks.
After half an hour the old man finally managed to get Fred under control and took him for a walk after a few weeks.
While the old man was on the walk he ran into another old man with an Alpaca. So they started to have a chat while they were walking their Alpacas. When their legs got tired they both tied up the Alpacas and sat down.
Since the men got carried away chatting they didn’t notice that the Alpacas were gone!
They both started looking around the area they were both sitting.
Since the old men couldn’t find the alpacas they knocked on doors of the closest houses and asked “have you seen two brown alpakas”.
To Mr.Mac I believe I should be selected in the football team without trying out. This is why I should be selected over everyone else.
I believe this because I practise 4 times a week handballing and kicking with my dad and my younger sister 1 hour every time I play. I should also be in the football team because I can run fast and bounce at the same time. I am also a great tackler and can defend really well.
I am also not a bad goal kicker. If I had 10 shots at goal 20 metres out I would get 6 or more goals. I am really good at kicking bananas and torpedos.
I am a really good marker. I dive when the ball is low and jump when the ball is high. Once I jumped on my sisters back and took a brilliant mark. I also take alot of1 handers when I know I have more than a 64 % or more chance of marking it with 1 hand.
80%of the time I would be able to mark the footy. 60 % or even more of the time I would mark the football in a 1 on 1 contest. A 2 on 2 contest I would have a 31 % chance of marking the football. but with 1 hand I would only have a 1% chance of marking the football in a 2 on 2 contest. In a 1 on 1 contest I would have a 25 % chance on marking the football with 1 hand.
After reading this persuasive peace I hope you pick me to be in the team. Remember to select the best players. I hope it is including myself.
From Joshua MIZZI
Playground panda.
My name is Peter panda. People say I am a dreamer because I have always wanted to go to a playground, I live in a zoo .The closest play ground is a TWO EVEN THREE minute walk!!!It might not sound like a long walk but I’m a panda, we’re lazy. Anyway, this is my story. First I had to escape the zoo which is pretty easy if you’re a panda, but first nap time (1 HOUR LATER). Whoa I escaped .I think they thought I was dead and dumped me at the park. To be honest I lied I thought it was going to be hard to escape but, look I’m at the playground. I found a camera and I asked a girl to take my photo she was beautiful she had blonde hair and wore a white jacket over her black dress, she had black shoes and black leggings but for some reason she fainted, I think it was something I said, so I took the photo and became the first panda cow boy. yeehaw!!!
By manjulika
Edited by adi
The story of Lacy
One day a dog named Lacy went to the Water field’s park. Lacy the black dog was able to talk. He asked his owners Lilly and Dillon if he could by a pretend dolphin with his money. Dillon said to Lacy the dolphin was 25 dollars and a rip off. But lacy would not listen and he brought the pretend dolphin and was already playing with it. He also brought a tub so the dolphin can swim in it. It was time to go home but Lacy wanted to stay at Water fields forever. They said that they will give him his favourite sour and sweet doggie chewy sticks. He went into the Jeep with the things that he bought from the water park. When they got home Lacy and all the things the black dog bought went inside. Lacy the small black dog in the house that was the darkest place you could ever imagine into was figuring out a name for his new best friend. He wrote down Dillon, Lilly and their son Benjamin what they thought he should call his new best friend. Lilly said he should call her Ruby. Dillon said he should call her Isabel. Their son Benjamin said to call her Bianca. He decided it was going to be out of Ruby and Bianca but he could not decide. He asked Dillon for his opinion because if he asked the others they would choose their own. Dillon said to call her Ruby Bianca Wellington.
The End
By Joshua
The dog that once prayed
Once there was a dog that loved his family so much that he copied everything his family would do, his name was butch, he was a golden brown coloured dog with a black snout and big heart. One day before bed he came into the little boys room and saw him doing something funny, he decided to copy, he put his front paws up on the bed and closed his eyes. He listened to the boy mumbling the words “god bless mum, god bless dad”… and copied added his own twist…
“God bless my family, god bless my chew bones and god bless my squeaky toys!
After praying the boy went to bed so butch copied and went to his own bed in a corner in the little boys room, curled up in his bed gave a yawn and went to sleep.